I really liked this.
The textures were pleasant, and the music was great.
The animation was very good, especially considering the perspectives you used in some parts. Very nice.
I had a pleasant watching experience.
the perspective walk will be down, in my books, as one of the hardest things to animate, just because, for some incapable reason, I had major issues drawing the feet. :P
it was really weird.
Anyways, thanks for your words.
Speechless. Okay, wait....
Over the last three and a half years I've thought about the teaser you put out for this so many times; maybe once or twice every month, which is a lot considering nothing had reminded me of it. It was just a curiosity that stuck with me. I've gone back to watch it numerous times, yearning to know what was going to happen.
Your character already shows enough personality that it makes me think of her as more than a character; it's what I love to read in books, see in movies and art... and it's even more thrilling to see it in animation. I can't wait to get to know her better as the story progresses.
You're inspirational. Thank you.
I don't get the obsession with this dance, but...
...I won't hold that against you.
I think that the scenes could've been shorter... I was sort of waiting in boredom for something to happen each time because they were so long. I had to keep asking myself, "Okay, is it over or something?"
The animation was okay...
SO basically, I just found it very boring because I'm not very fond of this kind of thing(not including that in my rating) and you took too long to move on to other characters.
Before I view it/rate it..
Based on your comments, I have these suggestions:
Write a script/plot, and plan your stuff before you do anything. It helps, really.
After watching: It's under a game, yet there's no interactivity? Oh well.
Anyway, as an animation, it's pretty simple... but you seem to understand some basic concepts and have a bit of potential. Practice more(I'd say try to stay away from sticks, they never helped me, but that could be just me), plan what you want to do before you animate it (unless you work better than me without plans, in which case, be as random as you like), and keep at it. You'll get where you want to go if you keep it up.
You did really well, especially for your first flash. The artistic elements were great, and the music was enjoyable too.
As for blurring-- I think it only works on movie clips, I could be wrong, but once you have a movie clip, click on it, and look around properties for the tab "Filters," and then click the blue plus sign and choose blur.
As for speed... all I can say is less frames in comparison to the slower/normal speed parts. That, and a background that gives the viewer an idea of how fast the object is passing said background.
This was great, anyway. If it gets blammed it's because of the title; people on newgrounds are a bit retarded when it comes to actually watching stuff... It's practically proven-- someone uploaded a cool looking loader and gave the impression that it was a 'ground breaking RPG' or something. All it was, was an animation of a cool loader... and it passed with nearly 3.0.
If this gets blammed, you should upload it again under a different name. It doesn't matter what it is, but as long as it's not, "My First Flash" because that tends to alert people to click 0 for an easy blam point.
i know, but it doesnt deserve a better name, and i dont have the "tab" filters >_<
**k found it, i am such a noob damn,
The art style doesn't match my aesthetics, but I won't hold that against you. It was really short, which is probably the main problem I had with it ( but that's not even really a problem now, is it?)
Nice work, overall.
Hope you didn't get an A...
Because you did'nt deserve it. You deserve a B, because in Newtons third law, theres something called gravity that stops it, it doesn't just keep flying.
Other than that, its OK, just try to make sure you don't forget what keeps us from floating around...
Still if there WAS no gravity, you wouldnt stop going, thats why I didnt put any gravity for luigi
Gary's mod rocks, have'nt used it yet, half-life 2 installation is messed up..Its pretty cool..
fix it and hAVE FUN!
there should be one with someone is holding all the boxes of lucky charms in the world as hostages....
Anyway, it was too short, other then that...OK..
...I mean, maybe! :O
And thanks. *parys it passes(
"So stupid its contagious"
I dunno if saying your someone who your not is the best way, though.....
it's just to piss off the masses B)
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