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Jaex

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Well....

You traced everything except the people, even the "samurai sword"...Other than that, its good and it should get passed judgement

Great for a first...

You understand the basics of creating a flash movie...Now, all you lack is originality and story.

Start a writing a story line, and coming up with original characters.

no offence...but..

It looks like you traced scenes from the matrix...and its not very animated...the intro was too long...but its not bad for your first try..

Heh...

Not a bad flash...Would have been better with color (atleast the artist part)

Also, does the -Kun at the end of your name indicate that you are japanese? Or is it for show?

Moonlight-Dragun responds:

lol a japanese girl called me this once and i thought it would make an okay name.

Eh...

This is great for your first. All I have to say is, look at some other things in judgement. The ones that have a stick tween. This is like 10 times better then those even though you only used tweens. I gave you a five for effort and wonderful drawings. Practice ways to actually get the character to move.

You have potential!

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